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Saturday, October 30, 2010

community problem report

Depression is a period of general economic decline, also defined as a decline in GDP (Gross Domestic Product) for two or more continuous quarters.   The students of El Paso are economically being affected due to this current recession. This economic down trod is effecting not only the students but also the El Paso community.  If we don’t solve this problem there's a possibility that less and less students well be able to afford going to school at UTEP.
          Since 1994, more than 30,000 jobs have left El Paso, which has greatly affected the community making it harder for people of El Paso to afford College expenses.   According to the UTEP records the average number of students that enroll to UTEP is 20,154 students.  The average amounts of students that enroll in UTEP who are residents in El Paso are 16,705, which mean that at least 80% of the students who are enrolled at El Paso are residents. (According to Beatriz Castaneda, Writer for Prospector, she says that According National Association of Colleges and Employers, employers expect to hire 7 percent fewer graduates from colleges in the class of 2010 than they hired from the class of 2009. The reason why so many employers are cutting back college hiring is directly related to the weak economy). Now if the graduates from college are having trouble getting jobs, it must be a lot harder for students and even their parents to get jobs to pay for college expenses while attending. Now it’s not like college expenses are going to decrease any time soon, if anything the tuition will only continue to increase because of the demand for money, making students have to pay more for books, tuition, and transportation to and from classes. According to the Prospector titled: Students prepare to spend on textbooks, writer Natalia Quiroz interviewed Raul Mariscal, (manager for Textbook Express, said he has seen a decline in book sales due to the economy.) This is making it harder for students to pass or even want to register for classes. Now, according Jorge Gomez a writer of the Prospector titled: Graduation rates at UTEP, a slow train to the future, (he states that among the UT System's nine universities, UTEP has the lowest graduation rate within the last six years, this is corresponding to a 2007 report by the UT System Office of Academic Affairs and Office of Institutional Studies and Policy Analysis).This Writer (Jorge Gomez) also states that in 2007 we had surpassed the 20,000 student enrollment mark, 4,000 of these are incoming freshmen, this is where it gets interesting. According to the statics   out of those 4,000 students, amazing only 80 will graduate in 4 years. This sounds ridiculous, there is no possible way that 3,920 student’s couldn’t graduate in 4 years just because they couldn’t hack it in college. So the only logical reason is they are trying to juggle school, work, and there family all at once, which makes this very complicated.
          Alright let’s make it a little interesting, here is a little example to give somewhat of an idea of the economic struggle occurring in El Paso (I assure you these people are fake).Now, Barry Mcflunkerton lives on the east side of El Paso with his son Ryan (now with the divorce rate climbing all over the united states, this is probably the most ideal example for the society that we live in now), Ryan has graduated from El Paso high and is planning on going to college at UTEP. In order for Ryan to graduate in his planned time of 4 years, he will have to pay close to 8,000 dollars a year for tuition including books, traveling expenses (to UTEP and back to his home), and of course other school supplies. This is going to cost 1/5 of his father’s income every year, since according to ((www.City-Data.com)  the average adjusted gross Income (AGI) in 2004 is  $37,518).Now this has most likely gone do to the economic recession we are currently in. This is making it a little difficult for Ryan’s father to pay for his son to attend UTEP as a full-time student. And you can’t forget the current living expenses he and his son already have to pay off. So how similar problems like this get solved in economic state that we are in now days?
          There’s couple of ways to solve or fix this issue or issues similar to this, for instance two programs that are already being used by school is the Student Financial Aid and the Student Loan programs. But what about the people who can’t afford taking student loans, and the ones who are ineligible for financial aid, are they supposed to just give up their college dreams? According to Jose Martinez, also a writer for the prospector titled: Additional student fees may fund scholarships; (He states that The UTEP’s Student Government Association and state Sen. Eliot Shapleigh of District-29(El Paso) are working on passing a bill In the Texas Legislature that will help fund scholarships. This bill will create a student benefit scholarship funded by the students, charging each student $1 per credit hour). This seems like a brilliant idea, each student pitching an average of 8 to 12 dollars per semester will add up to an estimated guess of 200,000 per year. This bill can be very effective or a disaster depending on whether students can continue to pass classes and not have to repeat. A couple other ways we can fix this economic depression effecting El Paso Students is that we could consult with the student government to help reduce book prices, school supplies, and other school expenses. Something that I really hope gets changed to help better the recession that is affecting the El Paso students is the education cost increase. According to Juan Manuel Ramirez IV, a writer of the prospector titled: Enrollment up despite economy, (he states that the Texas state Legislature voted to deregulate tuition, which has been steadily rising since 2003. This is giving the schools the right to regulate on how much to charge their students for tuition). This can be good, but in order to fix this economic problem the choice should be give to the state to decide on how much each schools tuition should cost based on the average adjusted gross Income (AGI) in that particular city. Although this will affectively work it might cause some schools to cut down on school expenses causing some teacher to lose their jobs which we don’t want. There’s is also another possible idea that the school can start a program for students to loan money from the school and in return complete various amounts of community service hours for the University. (Examples such as, Food drive for welfare and homeless people, Trash clean-up around the Campus, and tutor services at the library for students (if qualified depending on GPA).
In conclusion this economic recession is affecting everyone very hard, and it’s going to be tough for our society to bounce back from the great debt we are in. The best idea is to keep on pushing threw, otherwise less and less students well be able to afford going to school at UTEP, which could possibly lead to a series of teachers being laid off. The best bet is to find a suitable program that works best for the UTEP community. It could possibly be the only solution to the debacle we are in.  











Work Cited
·         http://www.utepprospector.com/2.7382/graduation-rates-at-utep-a-slow-train-to-the-future-1.1035494, By Jorge Gomez Published: Thursday, March 26, 2009, Updated: Monday, January 18, 2010 10:01

·         http://www.utepprospector.com/2.7382/job-market-still-bleak-1.1034722, By Beatriz Castaneda ,Published: Tuesday, September 22, 2009 , Updated: Monday, January 18, 2010 10:01
·         http://www.city-data.com/zips/79902.html

·         http://www.utepprospector.com/2.7382/students-prepare-to-spend-on-textbooks-1.1034912 By Natalia Quiroz ,Published: Tuesday, August 25, 2009 , Updated: Monday, January 18, 2010 10:01

·         http://www.utepprospector.com/2.7382/additional-student-fees-may-fund-scholarships-1.1035786, By Jose Martinez Published: Tuesday, February 10, 2009, Updated: Monday, January 18, 2010 10:01

·         http://www.utepprospector.com/2.7382/enrollment-up-despite-economy-1.1035367 , By Juan Manuel Ramirez IV,    Published: Tuesday, April 14, 2009,   Updated: Monday, January 18, 2010 10:01

Agency discourse observation

The agency that I have observed and I felt that was not only interesting but also has a great relation and a great contribution to our society is Google. This popular agency is not only one giant discourse community but is also a universal search engine for cultures and all societies in the world.
At first viewed Google I didn’t think that was possible for it to have a discourse or even be considered an agency, so I looked up the definition of Agency, ironically on Google, and it states that an agency can be a business that serves other businesses. Letting that settle in brain I realized that Google is considered a businesses and is very helpful for not just a select few businesses but for all and upcoming businesses in the world. Yes Google is well known to be a search engine, but people to fully don’t understand how much Google has grown and become a powerful agency. Viewing Google I have noticed that it has its own originality which gives it its own type of agency. With its different Apps it is make viewing, the weather, news, stocks, videos and many other apps much easier. Something new that Google has now is now they give you the ability to build your own Google website almost like blogger.com but without the blogs. You have the ability to communicate with others thru instant message and e-mailing. You can also add and remove different apps to build your own personal Google website.
As I look further into the Google world I Start to see a two different types discourse communities within their website. The first one is of course there actual website with their multiple genres and, different type’s communication and specialized vocabulary you will have with other Google users. But it’s the second discourse community that I want to focus on. This discourse community is the one that the workers of Google have together. They have goals and genres and even specialized vocabulary which makes this website very interesting. For instance during lunch time at the Google company majority of the workers well all sit down, eat together like a family, in which they will converse and share new ideas about Google. Now I am not part of this discourse but I would assume that they have their own specialized vocabulary due to the fact that workers of Google are considered to be a giant family. As I spiral further into this Colossal of a website I begin to read their corporate information and their Google philosophy I discovered some of their typical genres. Besides the typical ones that are on the website (videos, music, news, shopping, images and many more), the workers of Google are all in their own specific genre. For instance they have their Board of Directors, Operating Committee, Engineers’, sales representatives, and others which all come together to form a whole community. The best thing about this website is the creators of Google make it easy for people to join their agency simply because they prefer ability of experience which give anyone a chance.            
Its originality and makes it one of the only agencies of its time. The use of this agency is to spread information to others about pretty much anything that anyone could think of, and is considered to be a building block to many other agencies and companies. I feel that without Google some of the technology and ideas we have now about our society would be unknown and possibly unheard-of. This is a very strong company that I someday I would like to join and be a part of. This agency falls under my communication major and there’s nothing better than doing something you love than doing something you hate. I would love to have a job like this and I hope one day way way in the future I can get a job like this.
In conclusion I hope you enjoyed this wild journey down the road of Google and have a better understanding of what Google is. And now I hope that you don’t see Google as just a search engine; but now as a agency, a business, and a society that is built on fulfilling other peoples goals and dreams.
Michael Amdall                                                                                                                                              English 1311   
                                                                                                               8/31/10
                                          Discourse community

            A discourse community is a social group that communicates, in part, using written texts but also shares common goals, values, writing standards, specialized vocabulary, and specialized genres. Everyone is a part of their own distinct discourse community(s). I am in 4 discourse communities, each one of them
            The first discourse community on my map is the addicting and well know Facebook. Facebook is a very popular and well organized discourse community. Facebook is a Social internet network that is use for friends and families. Some main goals for Facebook is talking, meeting, and finding friends. Facebook makes it easy to find old and new friends. A genre of Facebook is Farmville, where you can build your own farm and grow all different types of plants. Another genre of Facebook is the news feeds, which give you the latest news about recent events regarding your friends and your networks. The specialized vocabulary that Facebook has is abbreviations such as, LOL means laugh out loud, JK is Just kidding, gtg is Got to go, cya is see you later, and many others. Some other specialized vocabulary would be inside jokes and symbols, such as L J, “that’s what she said”, “birds the word” and, “Ayyuuuuhhh”. Anyone can join Facebook it has a set of easy steps to join.
            The second discourse community that I am apart of is my church. I go to church on post at Center Chapel One. It’s not a very big church but it stills a place of worship. Everyone can go to this church there are no restrictions. Some goals and values regarding this discourse community are to always look presentable when attending church make sure you stay assertive and awake during the service, everyone knows sometimes church can be tiresome, and finally you should always greet everyone with respect.  Some Genres of church are the bible, the choir, communion, and the priest. The specialized vocabulary that a church has is Gospel singing, prayer, and bible talk. These are all in each service when you go to church.
            The third discourse community is my favorite and most cherished one, my family. A discourse community this discourse community everyone has, even if it not threw blood some friends can be like a family. When you’re in a family you have a set of goals and values that you should abide by. One goal is that you should be a role model to your younger sibling(s). Some other goals are to respect and always tell them the truth. The genres of a family are family outings, diner with the family, cell phones, and cars.    
The specialized vocabulary that my family has is nick names, abbreviated text messages, letters, and facial expressions. Some examples of these are my family calls me big mike, When we text each other we use “K” for ok and “idk” For I don’t know and others. Everyone is a member of their own family. 
            The fourth and final discourse community of mine is college student. I am a college student attending at University of Texas at El Paso. The Goals and values for this community are: graduating, making money, socialize (meet new people), starting the building blocks for your future life. Some genres are the Internet, Text books, Emailing and Blackboard. The specialized vocabulary for college students is abbreviated phrases group discussions and e-mails, such as “The UGLC” meaning the Undergraduate Learning Center. In group discussions we speak as if we were in an interview, using proper grammar. To become a college student you must have a high school diploma or a GED, and good GPA. And you might need a decent amount of cash flow to get supplies.
            To sum it all up these are the discourse communities that I am in, and they are different in their own way which make me and everyone else in this world much different.